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01 July 2008 @ 03:27 pm
[FIC] (( Its hurts that I love you )) kazuya Part (1)  

Title : (( Its hurts that I love you )) kazuya
Rating :  dont know? see for yourself? 
Genre : some Romance , too much Drama
Pairings : Akame
Disclamer : I don't  own any of them 
Author : kamesoul
Summary : this is a  sad story about two young boys..etc

This is a  sad story about two young boys.. had fell in love with each other without knowing it ….The story began in their high school days … they were just normal classmates.They would never expect that one day they will be in a huge pain together… 

On a hot day at school the A.C got shut down and everyone  was extremely
hot and sweaty…. so the teacher asked the students to go to their houses ..

so they did.. But for some reason there was that one student who did not went back to his house And stayed at school !! under his seat the whole day << how weird 

The next day the other boy came so early to school because he had some contest between him and some other boys << don’t know why ??

Anyway he was the first one to arrive sure he was really happy !! then he walked into the class to see (( a boy sleeping on the ground )) with a very tired face And eyes felled with tears for unknown reason…..

He just stood there and stared at the sleepy boy with warm eyes .. and w\o notice he Wiped the boys tears and lift him up in his arms and so he hugged him …. so tight like he would never let go  !! then the other boy woke up and said : could we stay like this longer !!

He replied: that’s okay … tell me what's wrong with you .. did something happened to you ?! I cant say anything … (( why don’t you trust me )) .. 

no that’s not it .. I am just scared !!
ou are scared from what ?? .. then suddenly the bell rang and the students came .. And the boy ran to the bathroom …

he fowled him and said : hay you what is your name ?

He said my name is : kamenashi kazuya << I have been with you in the same class for 2 years and you don’t know my name >> 

Sorry but I thought you were wired
because you ((  don’t talk much – eat alone – always quite – and look so sad )) 

Kazu said : so what made you come to me and talk to me now Akanshi Jin ?!
Jin: I really don’t know why I just wanted to .. cant I ?! …

Kazu : that’s fine for me …. Oh ~ by the way thanks for what you did earlier…..
It made me feel so comfortable << I did not feel this good in a long time >>

Jin : What ?! … What did you Just said kamenashi ?!

Kazu : no its nothing !? << He said it with a very sad tone and tearful eyes >> 
Kazuya was standing by the door and he was almost like he was going to fall ..

Jin <<thought>> 
what's wrong with him ?
He seem so sad and like he haven’t ate in a long time .. wait isn’t this the same Clothes he was wearing yesterday and the day before I gusse he need a bath too !! ... Then he was thinking too long and kazuya was trying to snap him out of it .. so he did ... 

After that Jin asked kazuya about 1000 Q .. so he didn’t answer and said its not your business !! He got upset and get out of the school but he was thinking where he could go to ? After all he was homeless and poor but no one knew  !!

<<  His stepfather was abuse of – So he hurt kazu so much that he had to run away but no one looked for him or cared about him ....
His mother was an alcoholic – His father is dead -- He have no brothers or sisters  >>

And no one in his school know about it ... he haven’t told anyone about it ... And if anyone asks him about his parents he would say : They are away for something  ....

( Move On to part (2) )

slipknot240: Whyslipknot240 on July 2nd, 2008 04:19 am (UTC)
awwww that was really good!!!!
I feel so bad for kazuya.
Thanks for postingt!! Very good for your first fanfic
nao27nao_akameluv on July 3rd, 2008 11:35 am (UTC)
Love this!!!
Continue, okay?!
Ganbatte ne~~~ HUGS ^^
Hyn/Iris: kameyuki_mimon on July 3rd, 2008 01:03 pm (UTC)
It's really good :D
Hope you'll continue this soon ~
allenmairtin on October 9th, 2008 05:32 pm (UTC)
Reply Link Thread Posted by: tensai changmin desu yo ★ ( flufy_umbreon ) Posted at: April 2nd, pm (UTC) Wow, this is really really good.
ylhen12ylhen12 on July 3rd, 2008 04:36 pm (UTC)
it's really good^^ please continue^^
Eemir / Aidanhimeeemir_eera on July 5th, 2008 04:43 pm (UTC)
i like your story..keep up this good job...i'm waiting for tour next fic..huhu..ganbatte..
Numixgagulan on July 19th, 2008 04:51 pm (UTC)
I Love IT!~
U did VERY GOOD!~ i love it~
1st, i wanted to say sorry, (i knew it is a sad story) there is part that for me it is funny~
But i'm so sorry for Kazu~ poor him~
I cant wait to read the second part~
Thanks for informed me~
kamesoulkamesoul on July 19th, 2008 10:35 pm (UTC)
Re: I Love IT!~
Thank you for stopping by ... thanks
you dont need to say sorry i am just glad that you liked it ..
yes there is a funny part ... I really dreemed about this and made me cry its more like a nightmare relly haha ... you are welcome ..
secrettears_x on January 25th, 2009 09:24 pm (UTC)
I.... just simply love it.

Your way of writing is pure, direct. I love how you put interrogations sometimes, and how "w/o notice" popt in the story XD

My mood became kind of sad, but it doen't matter.
I realllllyy like your fic, and is curious about the next chapter.

(btw, I won the bet. You're a great writer <3)

*hugs* :33